Your overall idea for your poem is good and it realtes well to the allusion poem you created. But one theing you should try to do is allude more towards yourself because this graphic doesn't make much sesnse. KEH SHOOTS BRUH!
your allusion does seem unclear in your graphic. We are not sure if you are ares or the lion. And it also doesnt show why you picked ares as your allusion. You need to show ares and how he represents you. Please make the changes. AS(1)-LATE
Your overall idea for your poem is good and it realtes well to the allusion poem you created. But one theing you should try to do is allude more towards yourself because this graphic doesn't make much sesnse.
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your allusion does seem unclear in your graphic. We are not sure if you are ares or the lion. And it also doesnt show why you picked ares as your allusion. You need to show ares and how he represents you. Please make the changes. AS(1)-LATE
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